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Name: Hollie
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Pronouns: She/They
Location: London
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Join Date: January 19th 2011
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Re: The place that love forgot -
May 27th 2017, 08:43 PM
I love the repetition in this throughout the poem, it made it really powerful and I think reinforced the atmosphere that this piece of writing had within it. Keep writing! I've seen a few of your poems here and they're always very good. 
"Why want another universe if this one has dogs?"
Matt Haig - The Midnight Library
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