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Re: Poem 4 - August 12th 2012, 02:52 AM
I really like this! You did good with rhyming and using word choice here. I liked your uses of Sister Fate and Sister Fortune.

The sun is always gonna rise up
You need to get up, gotta keep your head up
Look at the people all around you
The way you feel is something everybody goes through