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Gotta keep your face up.
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Name: Dez
Age: 29
Gender: Agender
Pronouns: They/Them
Location: Connecticut, USA
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Join Date: November 16th 2010
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Re: (a really awkward poem) -
November 23rd 2012, 08:18 AM
I like how you wrote this and how you put the periods between each stanza. The way you wrote it made it really interesting. 
The sun is always gonna rise up
You need to get up, gotta keep your head up
Look at the people all around you
The way you feel is something everybody goes through
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