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(a really awkward poem) - November 23rd 2012, 03:05 AM

I may not know...

...
whether it’s meant
to
be
...
whether
the stars are
aligned for you+
me.
...
what tomorrow
may (not)
bring
...
the song you
cause my beating
heart to
sing
...
what each kiss
will
mean
...
if it
means
any
thing
...
why i always
feel stuck
somewhere be - tween
(...
what that means)
a vagabond
with (missing?) everything
...
if you’re
really
mine
and i can’t tell
you
everything
will be
fine

if you have my heart
(i think you do) but
i know
right now
you’re in my arms
and I hope somehow
that’ll do.


"For small creatures such as we the vastness is bearable only through love."
- Carl Sagan
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Re: (a really awkward poem) - November 23rd 2012, 03:30 AM

I really like this! Great poem







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Re: (a really awkward poem) - November 23rd 2012, 07:18 AM

I like how you wrote this and how you put the periods between each stanza. The way you wrote it made it really interesting.


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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