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TheQuietGirl October 11th 2012 11:36 PM

Poem of Ultimate Frustration!
 
I am a poet.
I can describe dead grass in over twenty ways.
A dead bug in fifty,
and use a rock in countless different metaphors and similes.

But you leave me without words.
And it's driving me mad how you can just waltz into my
vision and have every part of my brain trained on you and
ways to describe your hair, eyes, laugh, and wit,
but leaving me without the proper words to express them.

I never fall for people.
You could put the most charming, attractive guy
in front of me,
and I would not give him a second thought.

Every time I'm away from you, I can convince myself I'm okay alone.
But when you come back into my life,
I know that I'm really not.

¯|_(ツ)_|¯ October 12th 2012 12:06 AM

Re: Poem of Ultimate Frustration!
 
I really like this, especially the first stanza! :D

TheQuietGirl October 12th 2012 01:31 AM

Re: Poem of Ultimate Frustration!
 
haha! Thanks! :D All day, it has literally been like I am not a native English speaker, and i can't find the words to portray how I feel. It's absolutely maddening!

oldaccount October 12th 2012 05:10 AM

Re: Poem of Ultimate Frustration!
 
Omggggggg stop being so amazingggggggg
No, seriously :dem: I love your work!

TheQuietGirl October 12th 2012 10:02 AM

Re: Poem of Ultimate Frustration!
 
Awwwww thank you so much <3

And hey! I'll stop being amazing when you stop being so absolutely brilliant!! :D

Validity October 12th 2012 10:24 AM

Re: Poem of Ultimate Frustration!
 
I looooovvvvveeeeeee this!

Jay.


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