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WhisperingSilence

April 30th 2014 05:54 PM

Swingset.

you're the swing set,
i'm the kid on the swing who falls,
with each promise you make,
i know its just another one you'll break,
so with this blade i'll find a way as much more of this i just can't take,
i'll use it to rip my skin apart,
you're the swing set
i'm the kid on the swing who falls
with ever promise you make
i always hope it'll be the one you wont break..

DeletedAccount12

April 30th 2014 11:04 PM

Re: Swingset.

This is so creative. I love the idea!

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

May 1st 2014 12:31 AM

Re: Swingset.

I agree, it was short but really good. :D

Storyteller.

May 1st 2014 09:44 AM

Re: Swingset.

And again, the way you tie everything together, linking the start with the end but adding a little twist, is brilliant. Keep writing, and please keep sharing. D:

Azure.

May 1st 2014 10:56 PM

Re: Swingset.

This is really cool! I love the idea and the way you wrote it! :)

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