Triggering (SH): Swingset.

[WhisperingSilence]

you're the swing set,
i'm the kid on the swing who falls,
with each promise you make,
i know its just another one you'll break,
so with this blade i'll find a way as much more of this i just can't take,
i'll use it to rip my skin apart,
you're the swing set
i'm the kid on the swing who falls
with ever promise you make
i always hope it'll be the one you wont break..

This is so creative. I love the idea!

[Ennui.]

I agree, it was short but really good.

[Storyteller.]

And again, the way you tie everything together, linking the start with the end but adding a little twist, is brilliant. Keep writing, and please keep sharing.

[Azure.]

This is really cool! I love the idea and the way you wrote it!