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Alex Vause August 26th 2014 12:25 PM

The Dead that SpeaksFourteen Years- a poem by me
 
It's been a really long time since I posted a thread :nosweat: . But I wanted to post this poem because I think it's really cool and it's the reason why I won Prose Prize in my creative writing class last year. So a little background information for this piece: In class we were working on poetry and our teacher assigned us a project of writing a Tonka but we had to base the tonka off of a picture realating to nature. I'll post the picture it describes also. (It's a Z because as some of you know Bri is only an online name)

The Dead that Speaks Fourteen Years
Dried up rose petals
In the best Z formation
Dead but they tell my story
Only now off-red speaks clear
It speaks my life; fourteen years


http://i62.tinypic.com/xdgrx1.jpg

Ennui. August 27th 2014 03:31 AM

Re: The Dead that SpeaksFourteen Years- a poem by me
 
This is really well written!

Its.Just.Angie August 27th 2014 04:30 AM

Re: The Dead that SpeaksFourteen Years- a poem by me
 
I like it!! :D

.:PrincessZelda:. August 27th 2014 03:22 PM

Re: The Dead that SpeaksFourteen Years- a poem by me
 
This is really good! :)

DeletedAccount69 August 28th 2014 02:29 AM

Re: The Dead that SpeaksFourteen Years- a poem by me
 
I liked this. Thanks for sharing.

luckiicloverxx August 28th 2014 02:41 AM

Re: The Dead that SpeaksFourteen Years- a poem by me
 
Wow. This is amazing

Kintsukuroi. August 30th 2014 12:23 AM

Re: The Dead that SpeaksFourteen Years- a poem by me
 
This is really good! :)


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