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The Dead that SpeaksFourteen Years- a poem by me - August 26th 2014, 12:25 PM

It's been a really long time since I posted a thread . But I wanted to post this poem because I think it's really cool and it's the reason why I won Prose Prize in my creative writing class last year. So a little background information for this piece: In class we were working on poetry and our teacher assigned us a project of writing a Tonka but we had to base the tonka off of a picture realating to nature. I'll post the picture it describes also. (It's a Z because as some of you know Bri is only an online name)

The Dead that Speaks Fourteen Years
Dried up rose petals
In the best Z formation
Dead but they tell my story
Only now off-red speaks clear
It speaks my life; fourteen years




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"A Life Spent Making Mistakes Is Not Only More Honorable, But More Useful Than A Life Doing Nothing." -George Bernard Shaw

"In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: It goes on." -Robert Frost

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Re: The Dead that SpeaksFourteen Years- a poem by me - August 27th 2014, 03:31 AM

This is really well written!


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: The Dead that SpeaksFourteen Years- a poem by me - August 27th 2014, 04:30 AM

I like it!!
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Re: The Dead that SpeaksFourteen Years- a poem by me - August 27th 2014, 03:22 PM

This is really good!




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Re: The Dead that SpeaksFourteen Years- a poem by me - August 28th 2014, 02:29 AM

I liked this. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: The Dead that SpeaksFourteen Years- a poem by me - August 28th 2014, 02:41 AM

Wow. This is amazing
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Re: The Dead that SpeaksFourteen Years- a poem by me - August 30th 2014, 12:23 AM

This is really good!
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