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WhisperingSilence

May 9th 2016 10:27 AM

fix me

section 136,
its not something pills will just fix,
its not a magic cure,
you can add pills into the mix,
section 136,
you aint get those blades back,
you cant fix me,
section 136

IH8U2

May 9th 2016 11:10 AM

Re: fix me

I'm so sorry you are going through this pain.

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

May 9th 2016 03:44 PM

Re: fix me

I like the repetition of section 136 in this.

DeletedAccount69

May 10th 2016 11:56 AM

Re: fix me

Quote:

Originally Posted by Epiphany. (Post 1235575)

I like the repetition of section 136 in this.

I agree with this. I thought the repetition made the poem flow really well.

Kintsukuroi.

May 11th 2016 05:54 AM

Re: fix me

This is nicely written. I hope things are okay though and that you're take care of yourself. :hug:

hocus pocus

May 11th 2016 11:26 PM

Re: fix me

I agree, I like the repetition, too. Keep hanging on. :hug:

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