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fix me - May 9th 2016, 10:27 AM

section 136,
its not something pills will just fix,
its not a magic cure,
you can add pills into the mix,
section 136,
you aint get those blades back,
you cant fix me,
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Re: fix me - May 9th 2016, 11:10 AM

I'm so sorry you are going through this pain.
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Re: fix me - May 9th 2016, 03:44 PM

I like the repetition of section 136 in this.


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
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Re: fix me - May 10th 2016, 11:56 AM

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I like the repetition of section 136 in this.
I agree with this. I thought the repetition made the poem flow really well.
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Re: fix me - May 11th 2016, 05:54 AM

This is nicely written. I hope things are okay though and that you're take care of yourself.
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Re: fix me - May 11th 2016, 11:26 PM

I agree, I like the repetition, too. Keep hanging on.


If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first


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