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NeuroBeautiful August 10th 2016 11:09 PM

what if
 
What If
What if, one day
Instead of,
Being that person who holds it all together
I let go, and...
Just put down the weight of the world
Resting on my shoulders
Lay it
d
o
w
n
Onto a table, or
Maybe even a storage drawer
So I can take that deep breath
I was told would help
On the days I cry, and yell and beg
Someone to hear me, how much I carry
For now I try to put it down on paper
Maybe that will help me lift the burden,
Enough to breathe again

Ennui. August 10th 2016 11:16 PM

Re: what if
 
I can definitely relate and this was written really well.

Storyteller. August 10th 2016 11:24 PM

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This was an interesting style, and a really powerful message. Thanks for sharing!

NeuroBeautiful August 10th 2016 11:58 PM

Re: what if
 
Thank you both! It has been such a long time since I've written a poem and posted it here.

crystalpanda August 11th 2016 06:41 PM

Re: what if
 
that was a very good poem

NeuroBeautiful August 13th 2016 07:26 PM

Re: what if
 
Thank you Crystal

DeletedAccount69 August 14th 2016 12:59 PM

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I can relate to this. I enjoyed the way you set it up as well!

hocus pocus August 14th 2016 02:23 PM

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Glad to see a new poem from you! <3 It's nicely done and I think a lot of people can relate to it.

NeuroBeautiful August 19th 2016 05:37 PM

Re: what if
 
Thank you both of you


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