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what if - August 10th 2016, 11:09 PM

What If
What if, one day
Instead of,
Being that person who holds it all together
I let go, and...
Just put down the weight of the world
Resting on my shoulders
Lay it
d
o
w
n
Onto a table, or
Maybe even a storage drawer
So I can take that deep breath
I was told would help
On the days I cry, and yell and beg
Someone to hear me, how much I carry
For now I try to put it down on paper
Maybe that will help me lift the burden,
Enough to breathe again
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Re: what if - August 10th 2016, 11:16 PM

I can definitely relate and this was written really well.


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: what if - August 10th 2016, 11:24 PM

This was an interesting style, and a really powerful message. Thanks for sharing!


"Love means never having to say
you're a werewolf."
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Re: what if - August 10th 2016, 11:58 PM

Thank you both! It has been such a long time since I've written a poem and posted it here.
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Re: what if - August 11th 2016, 06:41 PM

that was a very good poem
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Re: what if - August 13th 2016, 07:26 PM

Thank you Crystal
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Re: what if - August 14th 2016, 12:59 PM

I can relate to this. I enjoyed the way you set it up as well!
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Re: what if - August 14th 2016, 02:23 PM

Glad to see a new poem from you! <3 It's nicely done and I think a lot of people can relate to it.


If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first


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Re: what if - August 19th 2016, 05:37 PM

Thank you both of you
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