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Meraki

August 25th 2017 08:35 AM

My stupid poem

A dandelion seed
Takes foot in the earth.
It doesn't know what to do
But it never gives up.
A dripping faucet
Drip, drip, drip.
It drips day and night
And it never gives up.
The itsy-bitsy spider
Goes up, and falls once more.
It gets cold in the rain.
And the spider
falls...

falls...

falls.
But the sun comes out.
And the spider doesn't give up.

I know it's lame, lol. I hope you like it tho.

NeuroBeautiful

August 25th 2017 05:16 PM

Re: My stupid poem

It isn't stupid at all. I actually really enjoyed it! I hope you keep writing.

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

August 25th 2017 08:43 PM

Re: My stupid poem

This isn't stupid or lame at all! I agree with what was said, you should write more. :)

Storyteller.

August 25th 2017 11:26 PM

Re: My stupid poem

I don't think this is lame or stupid at all. I definitely liked it, and I hope to see more of your work sometime if you feel comfortable sharing it with us. :)

Meraki

August 26th 2017 12:08 AM

Re: My stupid poem

Thanks for the support guys!

Arabesque- golfing girl.

August 26th 2017 12:23 AM

Re: My stupid poem

This was lovely to read. I liked it :) Good job. Hugs.

matthewmatters

August 26th 2017 01:58 AM

Re: My stupid poem

but its good to know we shouldnt give up too easily
so thanks for this poem

DeletedAccount69

August 26th 2017 05:52 AM

Re: My stupid poem

I really liked the message you were trying to convey with the poem. I hope to see more of your work in the future.

hocus pocus

August 26th 2017 12:34 PM

Re: My stupid poem

There is no such thing as a stupid poem. ;) I really liked the message here and like others have said I hope to see more of your work if you'd like to share!

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