My stupid poem

[Meraki]

A dandelion seed
Takes foot in the earth.
It doesn't know what to do
But it never gives up.
A dripping faucet
Drip, drip, drip.
It drips day and night
And it never gives up.
The itsy-bitsy spider
Goes up, and falls once more.
It gets cold in the rain.
And the spider
falls...

falls...


falls.
But the sun comes out.
And the spider doesn't give up.


I know it's lame, lol. I hope you like it tho.

[NeuroBeautiful]

It isn't stupid at all. I actually really enjoyed it! I hope you keep writing.

[Ennui.]

This isn't stupid or lame at all! I agree with what was said, you should write more.

[Storyteller.]

I don't think this is lame or stupid at all. I definitely liked it, and I hope to see more of your work sometime if you feel comfortable sharing it with us.

[Meraki]

Thanks for the support guys!

[Arabesque- golfing girl.]

This was lovely to read. I liked it Good job. Hugs.

[matthewmatters]

but its good to know we shouldnt give up too easily
so thanks for this poem

I really liked the message you were trying to convey with the poem. I hope to see more of your work in the future.

[hocus pocus]

There is no such thing as a stupid poem. I really liked the message here and like others have said I hope to see more of your work if you'd like to share!