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I have a bit of a poem...
Welp, here I go.
I was friends with Passion For a while Always time well spent Her presence always surrounded me Her aroma in the air Then I would get to work Do just what I wanted to do I look behind, And I see her there Looking back at me With her soft eyes And flowing hair Looking back at me And I smile, Only for a second And I decide to go to bed I look back And I see her there Looking back at me With sad eyes On a sad face Looking back at me I wake up the next morning And go looking for Passion But she is not there Where did she go? I wonder But she was gone As soon as she came She’ll be back one day With something new for me I’ll see her again, I swear Passion, looking back at me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Some feedback would be nice! |
Re: I have a bit of a poem...
I'd love to see more from you. You expressed yourself very well.
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Re: I have a bit of a poem...
This is really awesome! It is cool how Passion is a person and I like how you wrapped it all up at the end.
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