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I have a bit of a poem... - September 16th 2017, 03:22 AM

Welp, here I go.

I was friends with Passion
For a while
Always time well spent
Her presence
always surrounded me
Her aroma in the air

Then I would get to work
Do just what I wanted to do
I look behind,
And I see her there
Looking back at me
With her soft eyes
And flowing hair
Looking back at me

And I smile,
Only for a second
And I decide to go to bed
I look back
And I see her there
Looking back at me
With sad eyes
On a sad face
Looking back at me

I wake up the next morning
And go looking for Passion
But she is not there
Where did she go?
I wonder
But she was gone
As soon as she came

She’ll be back one day
With something new for me
I’ll see her again, I swear
Passion, looking back at me

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Some feedback would be nice!

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Re: I have a bit of a poem... - September 16th 2017, 04:31 AM

I'd love to see more from you. You expressed yourself very well.


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Re: I have a bit of a poem... - September 17th 2017, 12:52 PM

This is really awesome! It is cool how Passion is a person and I like how you wrapped it all up at the end.


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