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History cw....anyone able to look over it for me? - January 10th 2009, 06:43 AM

So its on the factors that brought about change for women during victorian era.


" Education was the most important factor in bringing about change for women in the period 1800-1920....how far do you agree with this view?"


so i've done it. Tried to use quotes -contemporary and historians
tried to contradict a historian view
had to decide what to measure change as.

So i was was wondering if anyone could look over it for me? Just see whether it makes sense. And if your good at history :P whether theres anything i've missed, or could add.

Pretty please? Just leave a comment if you will, then i can pm u the cw. Thanks so much xx
   
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Re: History cw....anyone able to look over it for me? - January 10th 2009, 07:21 AM

I'd be glad to look over it, but can you explain what you're worried that you haven't done/aren't good at so I know what to be looking for?
   
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Re: History cw....anyone able to look over it for me? - January 10th 2009, 09:34 AM

I'll also be happy to look over it for you! Feel free to PM me. And what exactly should I look for as asked above?


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Re: History cw....anyone able to look over it for me? - January 10th 2009, 05:10 PM

Hi, thanks both of you. I'm looking for general structuring of an argument. Whether i've defined what i'm measuring change for. And generally whether what i've done makes sense. If either of you know the topic and think i've missed anything, then it would be great if you can tell me. It just feels really weak, and my teacher wont help. I'll send it to you both tomorow thanks xx


   
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Re: History cw....anyone able to look over it for me? - January 13th 2009, 10:06 AM

OH DEAR GOD.....i feel like a born and bred idiot....my sister went onto my account and fiddled with files. The one i sent was a practise essay not coursework...I feel soo stupid, and really guilty at getting you to look over it when it wasnt what i needed. Though to be fair the comments will still be usefull in future writing.


ARRGGHH...I'm SOOO Sorry....


   
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Re: History cw....anyone able to look over it for me? - January 13th 2009, 12:12 PM

are you doing AS level history of women? If so I'm doing this.
Praps not, in which case I probs nown just sound a little weird, so ignroe me!
   
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Re: History cw....anyone able to look over it for me? - January 13th 2009, 01:12 PM

Similar....at's A2 and what promoted change for women....


   
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