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Arrow a short peice of writing - February 15th 2015, 07:29 PM

I called it the burning city
Every building spewed streams white vapor and smoke from their pipes that littered the roof tops. The White strings of smoke merged together in the sky, creating one big cloud of pollution that looked like ash. Anyone who didn't know any better would think the city was burning alive, but locals would call it a Saturday morning.
Even though the city looked it, there wasn't a single flame to be seen.
The city was full of empty people, going along with whatever is thrown at them in a robotic, systematic way, working jobs that sucked the dreams and personality out of them.
But there were a handful of people, extraordinary people, with fire in their hearts and a spark in their eyes.
When they walked by, you knew who they were.
I was determined to be one of those people, I was determined to work until I needed no introduction.
   
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Re: a short peice of writing - February 15th 2015, 09:56 PM

I really like some of the descriptions in this! This could be the start to a story maybe.


   
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Re: a short peice of writing - February 16th 2015, 11:28 PM

Thank you for sharing this!




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Re: a short peice of writing - February 17th 2015, 03:19 AM

Thank you for sharing this! I liked the detail you put in this.
   
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