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Leave Me - May 14th 2015, 09:45 AM

How can one give love without receiving
why does a part of me keep believing
you are perfect for me
Even when we're sure we'll never be

Is it the latching on to just have something,
instead of nothing
Is it because maybe this part is right
I worry and I stay awake at night

I think I'm sick
It is harsh when only
one is pained by this question
I don't know how long it wil stick
around

The part of me is wrong
If you don't want to hear me complain,
then leave me.
Because I am to weak to overcome
the part of me that does.

Do it right
Even if it's simple,
I am always afraid.


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Re: Leave Me - May 14th 2015, 05:54 PM

I really like this :-)
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Re: Leave Me - May 14th 2015, 07:38 PM

I can relate to this. Nice one!


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Re: Leave Me - May 15th 2015, 02:15 AM

You write really well!


   
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Re: Leave Me - May 15th 2015, 06:49 AM

This is really well written!


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Re: Leave Me - May 15th 2015, 07:00 AM

I really like this stanza:
Quote:
The part of me is wrong
If you don't want to hear me complain,
then leave me.
Because I am to weak to overcome
the part of me that does.
   
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Re: Leave Me - May 17th 2015, 03:51 AM

This is awesome! I love the first two lines.


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