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don't take my hand - January 14th 2009, 08:18 PM

Well, I feel like I'm losing my mind
I'm running and leaving everything behind
Losing faith in everyone
All at once, it's coming undone
Take a look around,
There's nothing left but shattered pieces on the ground
This room is loosing air
It's getting harder to breathe, I swear
My mind can't put at ease
The nervous knocking of my knees
My heart can't contain
The racing of my brain
The tension is growing stronger
I don't think I can take this much longer
I give you everything, but don't know what you need
I'm waiting for you to take the lead
No matter how it unfolds, I know you'll walk out the door
You say to swim,
But the more I do, the further I am from the shore
I'm tired of this place
and everything that it portrays
I need to know there is more than this
I need to know that something better exists
Don't take my hand and show me the way
I know that I'll just pull it away
We all need someone to run to when times are hard
It's just too much for me to let down my guard
I want to have someone to lean on
But I fear I've become too withdrawn
I'm back to where I was before,
Nothing makes sense to me anymore
Although to you that doesn't mean much,
Because, I may tell you that you're my crutch
Things don't always go as planned,
But listen to my silence…
it means more than you can understand.
   
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Re: don't take my hand - January 15th 2009, 10:06 AM

this poem is very good, keep it up. Who did you write this poem to?


You are beautiful just the way you are.
Looking like a fallen star.
Don't listen to what people say.
They don't know the real you, anyways.
   
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Re: don't take my hand - January 15th 2009, 10:35 AM

Well written poem, I enjoyed reading it


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Re: don't take my hand - January 15th 2009, 12:46 PM

That shows a lot of emotion,i like it,its really good!
You are a really good writer!
   
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Re: don't take my hand - January 15th 2009, 09:23 PM

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this poem is very good, keep it up. Who did you write this poem to?

no one in particular...just everyone haha
   
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Re: don't take my hand - January 16th 2009, 10:40 AM

Wow! I completely felt that. =]


[x] Even though I'm the sacrifice,
You wont try for me, not now,
Though I'd die to know you love me,

I'm all alone,

Isn't something missing?
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