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Pretty Little Thing - November 24th 2018, 12:13 AM

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Oh Pretty Little Thing,
Who stands looking in the mirror.
Do you make promises to eat less and purge?

They will make sure you eat and smile when you do,
But little do they know,
That amidst your shadowy lair,
You sit there and smile at your beautiful creation.

Oh Pretty Little Thing,
With the crimson letters.
Do you cry yourself to sleep?

While they tell you it gets better,
You stand alone,
In your home sweet homestead,
And imagine a still figure swinging.

Oh Pretty Little Thing,
With the masked smile.
Do you like playing pretend?

You play house and smile that beautiful smile,
But behind closed doors,
And in the darkest parts of your heart,
You feel so alone.

Oh Pretty Little Thing,
Whose laugh echos.
How much longer do you have?

They think you're perfectly fine,
And go on with their day,
But would they notice,
If another flower wilted away?


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Re: Pretty Little Thing - November 24th 2018, 08:44 PM

Very well written. Thank you for sharing <3


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Re: Pretty Little Thing - December 1st 2018, 10:56 PM

I like how you started some lines with "oh pretty little thing."


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Re: Pretty Little Thing - December 1st 2018, 11:22 PM

I really like this Aiyannah. I especially like when you say about putting on that smile and then really feeling alone and hurting inside. That is me in a nutshell.
   
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Re: Pretty Little Thing - December 2nd 2018, 11:07 PM

This was beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.


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