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my second hand smoke - January 20th 2009, 10:59 AM

you are my second hand smoke
no-one can see im dying at all
but you linger in my body
and soon i wil fall

grinding me down
slowly but surely
not even making an attempt
to cure me

was i what you always wanted
when you took me unwillingly
did you dream about it
did it matter that it was me

i saw it in your eyes
concentrated on tearing me apart
that the innocence u claim
didnt play a part

i pretend to forgive
just hoping that
in a matter of time
i can forget
   
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Re: my second hand smoke - January 21st 2009, 12:02 PM

i love this.
its sad but level headed
and flows awkwardedly nice
nice one. keep writing
   
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Re: my second hand smoke - January 21st 2009, 12:29 PM

I really like this. It might make people think twice before smoking in front of their loved ones.


   
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Re: my second hand smoke - January 21st 2009, 12:32 PM

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Re: my second hand smoke - January 24th 2009, 10:12 AM

lol its not actually about second hand smoke. obviously didnt make that clear ;P
thanks for the kind words
   
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