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it's your voice - April 5th 2011, 03:15 AM

i am mildly schizophrenic and i hear a few voices in my head and the weird thing is that the voices in my head are the voices of people who i am closest to and who i consider to be some of my closest friends. this poem talks about the things that they're voices have been saying to me and by the way they have been acting, it kind of seems like this is how they feel anyway. let me know what you think!

Itís your voice
Telling me to give up
Itís your voice
Telling me to just die
Itís your voice
Saying Iím not worth it
Itís your voice
Laughing at me
Itís your voice
Speaking hatred to me
Itís your voice
Telling me lies
It may not be you,
But itís your voice
   
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Re: it's your voice - April 5th 2011, 03:18 AM

Wow, this is very powerful. Though, they don't seem like nice voices.
I would say don't listen to them. I know it may be hard, but what they are saying isn't true.
I do like the structure of the poem though. :]


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Re: it's your voice - April 5th 2011, 03:20 AM

thank you! i love writing poetry because i can get my feelings out in a safe way
   
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Re: it's your voice - April 5th 2011, 07:43 AM

I agree about writing being a safe release - I use it for the same reason.
I really liked that. The repetition worked well, and I especially liked the ending.


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