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Your Future Is Unwritten
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Name: Corrina or coco
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all eyes on me -
May 19th 2011, 10:34 PM
every ones looking at me
all eyes on me as anxeity come through me my heart begins to beat faster and faster all eyes on me in front of them all i start to shake like i will fall i look around all eyes on me i look down at my paper words scrambled around i struggle to discode my own simple work why am i in front why was it my turn i look up nervous as can be all eyes on me i look down as i start to read i who am nervous begin to read those word come out fast and mumbed to but they understand they were nervous to so i take a deep breath and start again all eyes on me i hear the giggles in the back so i start to read ignoreing those girls all eyes on me my friends support me as i read when im done i rush back to my seat now im safe not one eye is on me but now its her all eyes on her  dont give up just hold me now  Sometimes giving up is the last thing we do. Never look down you will miss opportunities ahead  .TJ. is mine MWHAHAHA |
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May 20th 2011, 02:57 AM
I really like this. You capture all the emotions really well and how consuming the anxiety can be. You have talent!
no matter how long the night, dawn will break ~ African proverb
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Love <3 You
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Re: all eyes on me -
May 20th 2011, 03:19 AM
amazing poem and it was awsome how you got the nervous, almost desperate feeling captured in it. It something relatable to basically everyone. Keep writing i luv it !! <3
Remember, The steeper the hill... The better the veiw in the end <3
Without Love Im always gonna be lost aren't I?  Your only mad 'cause I'm stronger now and you can't push me around My Daddy once told me I was to weak to accomplish my dream, so I did it . . . NEVER take life too seriously, nobody gets out alive anyway ... |
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 Normality, my friends.
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Re: all eyes on me -
May 20th 2011, 12:04 PM
Coco! This is sooooo good. I love that it painted a picture in my mind.
That's hard to do as a writer. Awesome job girl!  Not all those who wander are lost. |
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