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Question twisted love dream - July 16th 2011, 07:32 AM

Walking through the dark dense woods,
The sound of our laughter fills the air
The sound of his steps close behind
We look at each other and sigh
Take out our weapons of choice
Bam they go like the speed of light

STOP

We walk in the meadow
All covered in blood
H saved me for the darkness life has become
The other is coming.
He loves me too
But I love brown eyes more

STOP, REWIND

Back to the beginning
Back to that day
Where I saw a tall guy with blue eyes
I should have not manipulated him
I should have stayed away
But bam and no I never listen

STOP, REWIND

Back to the past
A little girl of the age of 3
Holding a teddy bear tightly
Boy come running and pushes her down
Takes the toy and runs around
Girl stares in wonder with teary eyes
Boy returns and hands it back
Smiling sweetly at the girl this time
Girl all nerves but with a shy smile
Guess who fell in love

STOP,FASTFORWARD

Present day
Girl lays in bed thinking
About 4 in the morning she couldn't sleep
A twisted love dream was all she will see
   
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Re: twisted love dream - July 16th 2011, 07:39 AM

Dude, that's cool. I like how it rewinds to the past and then goes to current time, it's really cool. I could imagine the little girl part. o:


The lights are out and I barely know you
We're going up and the place is slowing down
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