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Exclamation my falling death (a dream) - July 29th 2011, 06:21 AM

its the top
top of everything
and im just sitting here

the wind blows
my short brown hair
as a smile comes to my face

my legs are dangling
over the edge
and they sway around

to look down
a shiver of fear
would go through me

but just sitting here
makes me really happy
no pain in anyway

but all good must end
and my happiness was so thin
and one person made it end

he comes up
behind my smiling face
quietly like always

his arms straight out
a cruel glare in his eyes
something really uncommon

his hands grab my shoulders
probably leaving bruises
but to me i didnt expect

i turned to him
not worried
for he has always been so nice

he looked at my smile
and his eyes came back
just for a moment

"Daisy, could you stand
please stand up for me"
he tells me

i stand up
and wobble a bit
he hold me from falling

he tells me
"Daisy look,
out at the sky"

i look up
and it was sunset
all purple and orange

in his arms
it was the best feeling
but he suddenly let me go

i turn to ask
but i feel the push
and everything rushing foward

im in midair
the wind blowing
slow motion is devastating

i know ill die
but why
i think as i look up at him

he was startled
like he just saw something
he didnt like

and he was reaching for me
screaming my name
"daisy, daisy, daisy"

i reach for him
my arms wailing
my screams for him

but it was like he changed
his eyes went dark
and he pulled his arms back up

i was falling
but i needed to know

"im sorry, im sorry
but you were in the way
im sorry."

my faces a teary thing
but i manage to say one thing
"i love you anyways"


to love someone is such a beautiful thing,
Keep it in your heart forever
And show it when you need to
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Re: my falling death (a dream) - July 29th 2011, 06:56 AM

I really like this, I could imagine you sitting out there and everything.

Let it come and let it be...

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Re: my falling death (a dream) - July 31st 2011, 03:13 AM

This is really cool. I like it alot.

Don't you know you're lovely?
Jenn <3
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Re: my falling death (a dream) - July 31st 2011, 03:19 AM

awwwww!!!!! you wrote that so beautifuly! its amayzing!

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The world will bleed its bloody tale. People will throw their stones. But the one thing you must always remember is:
You no longer walk alone.
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Re: my falling death (a dream) - July 31st 2011, 04:12 PM

Very great poem! I love all the imagery! Keep writing
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Re: my falling death (a dream) - August 1st 2011, 02:58 PM

this is a really good poem!
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