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School - December 11th 2011, 05:25 AM

School

Walls, Walls, and more walls
Fence to keep you trapped in
A place where stress is a following river
Competing in this game some don’t want to play
They say they encourage young hearts and minds
Why do the young call it prison?
They say they want individuality
But they really want everyone to be in the same mold
As everyone else
Most of the dull classrooms have very little color
Some have blinds that are closed so
No natural light
The times you have to be outside is when the freedom bell rings
To change class
And lunch
Can’t it be mandatory to have class outside?
……
Have you ever heard the music of the halls?
“I’ve got some much work I am going to shoot myself
So and so have a 4.5 and I have a 4.0 I am so stupid”
No one understands the meaning of poor grades
here in prison
If you have low grades you are made fun of.
Welcome to the lonely prison of school


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Re: School - December 11th 2011, 05:57 AM

I really like this. Please share more of your poetry here
   
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Re: School - December 11th 2011, 05:59 AM

I like this. It's sardonic, but in a thoughtful (pensive) way.


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Re: School - December 11th 2011, 07:30 PM

this is really good. i like it


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Re: School - December 12th 2011, 02:38 AM

Thank you guys believe it or not I got suspended from school for writing this poem and a teacher saw it and shared it. I know I like it.


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Re: School - December 12th 2011, 10:36 AM

I really like it. I don't think you should have been suspended for it, but either way, I love it!


Sing, the last thing on your mind
The last word on your breath
I'll be the one to keep you
I'll keep you at your best



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Re: School - December 12th 2011, 12:54 PM

I 100% agree with you Dez. Too bad silly school doesn't.


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