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January 10th 2012, 11:14 AM
 My first attempt at pencil shading/art. Not that good.   So how is it guys? Any comments welcome. 
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January 10th 2012, 05:12 PM
That's beautiful! I like.
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January 10th 2012, 05:35 PM
I think it's very good for a first attempt. Give that you're only 14, you're going to go places!
If you want some criticism to build upon, I suggest improving the lighting of the scene. The water/sea seems a little all over the place. Keep at it.
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January 10th 2012, 07:44 PM
Wow, this is beautiful! I'd say you are very talented!! Keep at it!
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January 11th 2012, 07:15 AM
I really liked that.
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January 11th 2012, 08:35 AM
oh!! well thank you everyone that's so nice of you all!your compliments just made my day.
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January 11th 2012, 06:12 PM
I am shocked to know that that is your first attempt!
 It is unbelievable!! Beautiful!! \m/
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January 13th 2012, 12:57 AM
I really like it!
The only thing you might be able to improve is, like Jack said, lightening the scence, but also pushing the dark values darker so that there is more contrast. But amazing job!
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January 13th 2012, 10:42 AM
That is really amazing! It's so beautiful, great for a first attempt.
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January 13th 2012, 01:53 PM
thank you!
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January 15th 2012, 02:40 AM
I like it so so so much
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January 15th 2012, 02:47 AM
Sooo beautiful!
If you want to make it pop more, darken some spots in the leaves or ground, and instead of tilting the lines that you drew to make the house, make them straight up and down to make it more 3Dish. But I am VERY impressed with the leaves on the right side of the drawing, I've drawn for a very long time, and I still cant draw leaves like that AMAZING!!!
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January 15th 2012, 05:19 AM
That's so beautiful. I can't believe it was your first attempt. You definitely have a talent for art and it's something you should definitely pursue.
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January 15th 2012, 10:15 AM
thank you people for your suggestions and compliments!
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January 16th 2012, 04:28 AM
I think it's great too, especially for a first attempt. Keep at it!
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January 16th 2012, 05:30 AM
This is very good for a first attempt.*
If you're leaning towards realism style, I have a few suggestions.* The primary key to realistic drawings is the quality of shading. In order to shade properly, you need to blend properly. Tortillions and paper stumps work wonders, your art will be significantly better after using these super cheap tools.* Also, when shading you need to learn the realistic ways that light hits an object. Most books I've studied suggest drawing a sphere and shading it from the darkest dark to lightest light.* Once you study and understand how important shading is when making a good portrait or drawing, your art will become master pieces. You have a long way to go, but it is nonetheless a beautiful drawing, and are naturally talented.* I'm 16, so not much older than you, and haven't personally taken any classes. I believe art should be something one teaches themself to truly be sentimental. Good job & keep sketching This is Brian Connolly --->  <--- This is me"Obsession" would be an insulting understatement. |
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January 16th 2012, 08:52 AM
Akito: thanx a lot!
xxLostAngels: Even I think the same and dont take any classes. I will certainly use your ideas next time! thanks for the awesome suggestions and appreciation! xx
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