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I loved you, I wish I could still. (A Poem) - January 27th 2012, 02:34 AM

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I post too much here. I just had to share it. I miss him so much <3
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I loved you, I wish I still could.

I loved your hugs,
I wish I still could have them.

I loved your laugh,
I wish I could still hear it.

I loved how you joked,
I wish I could hear one now.

I loved when you told me of peter,
Down in the basement,
I wish you could tell me again.

I loved when you called me George,
I wish you still could.

I loved you,
But I didn’t say goodbye,
I just wish I could.

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RIP Grandpa.
<3 the man who named the person I'm becoming.
I love him. so damn much.


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Re: I loved you, I wish I could still. (A Poem) - January 27th 2012, 09:46 AM

I am so sorry for you loss. I can't imagine how hard this must be for you. This is a beautiful piece. Keep up the good work!




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Re: I loved you, I wish I could still. (A Poem) - January 27th 2012, 08:32 PM

Thanks. It's not that bad, it's just *sighs* I'm recalling myself George (which makes me happy.)


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Re: I loved you, I wish I could still. (A Poem) - January 28th 2012, 02:47 AM

Aw it's really nice. As long as you're happy.


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Re: I loved you, I wish I could still. (A Poem) - January 28th 2012, 03:10 AM

It's great George... What a great way to remember someone so important to you.


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Re: I loved you, I wish I could still. (A Poem) - January 28th 2012, 09:15 PM

@ Shawn, thanks. ^^ It is.

@ BruceLeeDemarcus, thanks ^^


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Re: I loved you, I wish I could still. (A Poem) - January 29th 2012, 01:23 AM

You're welcome!


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Re: I loved you, I wish I could still. (A Poem) - January 29th 2012, 02:17 AM

Fits my life right now so perfectly. Love it.


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Re: I loved you, I wish I could still. (A Poem) - January 29th 2012, 03:14 AM

This is really great, I like this.


Sing, the last thing on your mind
The last word on your breath
I'll be the one to keep you
I'll keep you at your best



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Re: I loved you, I wish I could still. (A Poem) - February 3rd 2012, 01:54 AM

looks like grandpa knew you were George before you did, huh?
He would love this poem, I bet.
And I think he's seen it, wherever he is



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