Triggering: Work in progress

SilentBunny · 03:09 AM

Decided to post my story I am working on, its a it of a rough draft..umm enjoy

I got in my car, screeched the tires and pulled out of the parking lot. Where was I headed? Didn't matter, school had just finished and I was free to go anywhere I wanted, the world was mine for the taking. I drove until I hit the highway, then set the cruise control and lit myself a cigarette.

He heard a thump from under his car, and he had just blown a tire. As he stopped to get out and change it, a truck drove by and hit his car. There was a huge dent from where contact was made.

As he headed downstairs, he could hear here muffled screams for help. His knife glistened in the light as he took each step. He smiled as he saw his victim, tied to a chair, her eyes pleading for help.

He stepped out of his car and walked up to his house, the porch light coming on as he unlocked the door.

He went in to his room, shut the blinds, and reached in his drawer pulling out a knife, a smile spreading across his face as he saw it. “Hello, old friend” He said, his voice sounding pained.

He took off his shirt and saw scars covering his body, he ran his fingers over them. Tears welled up in his eyes as he made the first cut on his skin, the crimson blood dripping over the edge of the knife and onto the floor.

Phone ringing “Hello? John is that you?”

John: “Sorry, must have called by accident”

click He hung up the phone and got dressed. “Maybe i shouldn't do that today” He went outside and opened his garage and hopped in his car and decided to go for a drive around the countryside. As he passed a dirt road he doubled back and drove in it, it lead him into the woods. He passed trees as he went on his way further and further in to the woods.

He entered a room, and in the room was a lamp . The lamp was the only source of light in the dimly lit room.

He strained his eyes and saw a figure in the corner crying. As he got closer he saw it was a little girl sobbing while holding a teddy bear. She clutched it tightly to her chest as the guy came closer.

“Who are you?” She whispered.

He got within 10 feet of her when she slipped in to another part of the huse and was gone.

At this point the man went around the room in search of a light switch to get a hold of the situation and figure out where he was.

Whrr The room light up and he saw the gravity of the situation. There was dried up blood in the corner of the room where the girl had been. He went into the other room in search of her, but he didnt find her anywhere. Then he heard a creak from under the sink, and looked in a cupboard and he found the girl hiding there with blood on her wrists and under her nails.