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WhisperingSilence

May 19th 2012 04:32 PM

Blood stained wings

Trapped in a world full of hate,
Thoughts and urges,
The blade is her fate,
Her halo rusted in the blood
As she cut , a rive of crimson red did only flood,
She'd removed her wings , replaced with a blade,
She whispered her last few words,
Blood stained.

BillieRose88

May 20th 2012 12:34 PM

Re: Blood stained wings

This is really, REALLY good!
I absolutely love it! :D
I've said this to you before, but, I LOVE to read your work. You are amazing :)

Keep Writing! :) xx

SM13	May 20th 2012 04:44 PM

Re: Blood stained wings

I like it :). Reminds me of myself.

Koharuchan

May 21st 2012 01:49 PM

Re: Blood stained wings

I think this is very good. It's short but has strong emotion. Great job! :)

mindflower

May 22nd 2012 12:43 AM

Re: Blood stained wings

i love it. its really beautiful. like someone else said, it sort of reminds me of myself.

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