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it - November 4th 2016, 04:26 AM

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It will get better, I bet
Although we have yet, to
define "It"
"It'll be okay", they say
"It happens for a reason"
Just hang in there
I don't mean to rain on your parade
But I hang in every single day
I swing from a branch
And sometimes, I want out
Sometimes I want
To flight more than to fight.
To free-fall down below
Is a dream worth dying for
The Glow-in-the-dark stick
The forbidden "eat me"
Ancient sacred secret poison potion
For now, hanging in thin air
Will do,
In due time,
I will see
What this special "it" is about
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Re: it - November 5th 2016, 11:09 PM

I admit that I don't fully understand parts of this, but I did really enjoy it anyway. Thanks for sharing!


"Love means never having to say
you're a werewolf."
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Re: it - November 6th 2016, 12:21 AM

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I admit that I don't fully understand parts of this, but I did really enjoy it anyway. Thanks for sharing!
I admit, this was spontaneous and a response poem to someone else's work that began with "It gets better"

I confess, I confused myself with it too. And wasn't sure about posting
I've been extra scatterbrained lately.
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Re: it - November 6th 2016, 02:14 PM

I really like this one and I think a lot of people will be able to relate to "it."


If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first


The axe forgets, but the tree remembers
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Re: it - November 8th 2016, 10:16 PM

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I really like this one and I think a lot of people will be able to relate to "it."
Thank you and cool play on the word :3
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Re: it - November 9th 2016, 12:12 PM

The spontaneous poems are the best!


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: it - November 10th 2016, 11:00 PM

I write spontaneous poems or I used too! Sometimes they end up being the best.
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Re: it - November 15th 2016, 04:01 PM

Thank you all of you

@Abibliophobe- oooh I wanna see your spontaneous poems :3
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Re: it - November 16th 2016, 06:00 PM

Wow, this made me think a lot, I usually don't hold the term, "it" to high standards and have so much meaning. But this shows little words can mean a lot, even teachers would prefer us to use more educated euphemisms.

Thank you for sharing.


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