December 22nd 2023 05:16 PM |
Butterscotch. |
Re: Caged
I like the comparisons too, between you feeling trapped and those animals being trapped. Well done! I hope you share more.
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November 3rd 2023 08:22 PM |
Celyn |
Re: Caged
This was really good. I liked the comparisons between feeling trapped and animals being trapped!
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February 4th 2023 09:52 AM |
Arabesque- golfing girl. |
Re: Caged
This is lovely and I enjoyed reading this too. You always do a wonderful job writing.
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January 26th 2023 02:46 AM |
Dawn. |
Re: Caged
I love this piece.
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January 25th 2023 09:45 PM |
Ennui. |
Re: Caged
I love when you post. This is good!
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January 25th 2023 09:17 PM |
WhisperingSilence |
Caged
Like an animal waiting to be released,
Talons rattle the cage,
Wings angrily flutter,
Trapped, wanting to be free,
A tiger paces wearily in its enclosure,
Impatiently roaring and growling,
Release me,
Release me,
Set me free,
Thats me , well more the anger,
Waiting to be set free, released,
Caged up,
Trapped, locked away,
Trauma and anger collide,
I need you to hear me,
I'm the bird with its wings angrily fluttering,
The impatient tiger roaring and growling,
Set me free, release me.
I'm caged.
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