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Topic Review (Newest First)
March 4th 2021 07:21 PM
Wheek!
Re: "The Feast"
I really like the style here!
February 25th 2021 06:10 PM
Golfing girl
Re: "The Feast"
This was lovely. Thank you so much for sharing this with us
February 24th 2021 08:54 PM
Garyl
Re: "The Feast"
This is well written and the imagery is striking. Thanks for sharing.
February 20th 2021 05:48 AM
.:Bibliophile:.
Re: "The Feast"
This was phenomenal. Thanks for sharing
February 14th 2021 06:42 PM
Celyn
Re: "The Feast"
I feel I can relate to this a bit; thank you for sharing
February 14th 2021 11:16 AM
sauorkan
Re: "The Feast"
I can feel the frustration and anger in this, and it's extremely relatable.
February 14th 2021 07:26 AM
Dusk.
Re: "The Feast"
I really enjoyed this piece too.
February 13th 2021 11:48 PM
Soda_Voxel
Re: "The Feast"
Thank you. I'm so glad you like it.
February 13th 2021 10:23 PM
Everglow.
Re: "The Feast"
I really like the way this reads. I could almost hear it being read in my mind with aggression and emotion and I really enjoyed reading it. I particularly like the last four lines, which I think are really familiar to me and probably many other people. Honestly really well written - thank you so much for sharing.
February 13th 2021 09:25 PM
Soda_Voxel
"The Feast"
I drown myself in fantasies these days.
I gorge myself on the hope that it will all go away in an instant.
I feast upon the desire to live a life that I can never have.
I chug the hope that one day I'll wake up and feel better all of a sudden down every day like a shot,
The feeling burning my throat.
I take pitiful bites of self love, care, and hygiene.
Repulsed by the taste.
And then I bury the flavour with harm, hatred and hopelessness.
What a shameful diet.