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				March 31st 2014, 09:34 PM
			
			
			
		 
               
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I walk through your pictures More blurred than a ghost
 Crossed these grey lines of terror
 Praised your philosophy overdose
 
 And you sing against the choir
 Thought only heat was part of fire
 But you still play with matches
 Covering the burns with bandages
 
 You released thousands of demons
 In the middle of a storm
 She only tried to teach you a lesson
 But you prepared these wrists for war
 I don't even want to walk with my friends
 Its funny that you'd use ribbons to showcase the end
 
 And we made it shower
 In the middle of a field
 We all fought for power
 But we've only learned how to steal
 
 I'd rather apologize for who I am
 Than walk these halls for the shortest distance
 But you still raise your flags
 Even when they've all been painted red
 
 So you release hundreds on demons
 In the middle of the stage
 Claimed you fought with passion
 But your blood seems to drip down the wrong vein
 And I'm scared to walk with my own friends
 They might have more than one colored ribbon
 
 The rebellion against our leaders
 Only brought us to treason
 You've made this an unwanted place
 Who knew the world would put on such an ugly face?
 
 I'll still walk through your pictures
 More blurred than a ghost
 As long as you still raise your flags
 Even when they've all been painted red
 
 And you still play with ribbons
 Like its some kind of joke
 But how would you feel if you made a person
 Dress with a rope?
 
 I bet they only smoked cigarettes
 To burn down this school with no regrets
  
            
               
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				March 31st 2014, 09:36 PM
			
			
			
		 
               
 
Beautiful, as usual!
  
            
               
 Do you ever get a little bit tired of lifeLike you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
 Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
 'Cause you gotta survive
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				March 31st 2014, 11:01 PM
			
			
			
		 
               
 
Thank you    
            
               
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				March 31st 2014, 11:19 PM
			
			
			
		 
               
 
This is really good!
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				April 1st 2014, 12:01 AM
			
			
			
		 
               
 
Thank you    
            
               
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				April 1st 2014, 09:58 PM
			
			
			
		 
               
 
I'm only going to pick out one stanza of awesomeness, but just know that I think the whole thing was written beautifully.  I love this beginning part! 
 
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					Originally Posted by better-than-ecstasy  I walk through your pictures More blurred than a ghost
 Crossed these grey lines of terror
 Praised your philosophy overdose
 
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				April 1st 2014, 10:23 PM
			
			
			
		 
               
 
AWe thank you!    
            
               
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