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Exclamation suiside poem I wrote. - June 14th 2011, 01:07 AM

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They try to stop you right in your tracks
you tell them now there is no going back
as you tack your life they begin to cry
but you know it's all a lie
as your spirit takes flight
you enter on to the light
gone from the world
not coming back, to this shack
it's just a rundown piece of crap
where I'm going I won't return
maybe in this you will learn
show them you care
because without them you go nowhere
there gone and can't come back
now you can get your life on track
   
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Re: suiside poem I wrote. - June 14th 2011, 02:01 PM

good poem! i like it. Keep writing.





From day one I talked about getting out
But not forgetting about
How all my worst fears are letting out
He said, "Why put a new address on the same old loneliness?"
When breathing just passes the time
Until we all just get old and die
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Re: suiside poem I wrote. - June 14th 2011, 02:03 PM

I like this poem.
Even though it is sad,
It is really deep and meaningful
   
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Re: suiside poem I wrote. - June 14th 2011, 02:29 PM

I like this poem, it's good


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Re: suiside poem I wrote. - June 14th 2011, 04:27 PM

Thank You all. it is sad but I think we can all relate.
   
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Re: suiside poem I wrote. - June 15th 2011, 03:29 AM

This is a really good poem!!! I like it.
umm, where you write "there gone and can't come back", should it be they're gone? As in; they are? It doesn't matter, either way.
   
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Re: suiside poem I wrote. - June 15th 2011, 11:34 AM

haha yes it should. Thank You
   
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