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January 13th 2015, 08:02 AM
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The feelings of being dirty and impure,
They strike you down to your very core,
The fear of being accused and blamed,
You keep it to yourself, you feel ashamed,
The feeling of being weak, unable to defend,
You withdraw from everyone, including friends,
You feel like everyone looks, you’re completely exposed,
Everyone looks and you think they all know,
That one person has destroyed your life,
They took your confidence and replaced it with lies,
Lies that have poisoned and changed your mind,
Lies that effect you and make you blind,
You no longer see the beauty in the world,
You see the people and want to hurl,
You don’t feel safe, you feel alone,
The persons taken everything you own,
Your confidence, your love, your self-esteem,
It’s all gone now, you no longer see,
Your life is void of light, a very dark place,
You’re stuck there with no way to escape,
Because now you’re a victim of a terrible crime,
A crime that has damaged and changed your mind.
I wrote this about 7 months ago when I was in a pretty dark place and just coming to term with the fact I was raped.
I hope this is okay but I don't know if its any good. Please comment.
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January 13th 2015, 09:18 AM
This portrays exactly what I have felt always. I can relate to this. Thank you for sharing it. I hope to see more of your work!
On another note, I am sorry you had to go through this and I am just a message away if you want someone to talk to. 
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January 13th 2015, 09:28 AM
Thank you so much and the same goes for you. If you ever need to talk, you know where I am 
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January 13th 2015, 04:51 PM
This is really good!
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January 13th 2015, 10:03 PM
I thought it was very good! There was a lot of emotion behind it, and the rhythm made it easy to read. Thank you for sharing, and I'm sorry you had to go through that.
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January 13th 2015, 10:39 PM
This is really powerful!
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January 15th 2015, 06:51 AM
This is really powerful. I can relate to this to a certain degree. I'm here if you need to talk.
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January 16th 2015, 12:00 AM
I think you wrote this really nicely. I can relate and I'm just a PM away if you'd ever like to chat.
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January 16th 2015, 07:09 AM
Thank you
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January 25th 2015, 04:02 PM
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Originally Posted by Kav.
This portrays exactly what I have felt always.
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This really does. And I can relate to it. Great job on the writing.
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