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What do you think of my metaphor? - March 21st 2018, 03:22 AM

This is for the metaphor poem in my senior portfolio. All my English teacher knows about my situation is that I was out sick for an extended period of time. "I began to deviate from layered tracks and overdubs, but would realize I was overdoing it" The metaphor is about the music industry with Queen in mind

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Re: What do you think of my metaphor? - March 26th 2018, 04:45 PM

I think that metaphor is really good!

Being in for a long time means that we often deviate from our 'normal' selves and there are often many layered reasons for this. Comparing this to the music industry, and specifically with Queen, who were known for their layered overdubs is a clever way of expressing yourself!


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Re: What do you think of my metaphor? - March 28th 2018, 03:29 AM

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I think that metaphor is really good!

Being in for a long time means that we often deviate from our 'normal' selves and there are often many layered reasons for this. Comparing this to the music industry, and specifically with Queen, who were known for their layered overdubs is a clever way of expressing yourself!
I'm actually referring to something a bit different from that. You may want to see some of my previous posts if you're interested in the meaning from my perspective
   
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