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Re: Beowulf Essay Intro and Conclusion -
September 2nd 2011, 06:18 AM
So you're asking people on TH to do your essay draft for you? I haven't read Beowulf so I cannot help in that but if you post some ideas you already have, you can get better critiques. Perhaps other users will do your draft for you but even if I read Beowulf, I wouldn't help you at all until you provide some of your own attempts.
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September 3rd 2011, 02:36 AM
If you wrote the main part, would you give some attempts of the intro and conclusion?
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Re: Beowulf Essay Intro and Conclusion -
September 3rd 2011, 03:21 AM
The thing is, english classes are to learn how to write. It's okay if you cannot write the perfect intro and conclusion, whats important is that you try and give a good effort. Then take the criticism you get and learn from your mistakes.
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Re: Beowulf Essay Intro and Conclusion -
September 3rd 2011, 06:06 PM
Your introduction and conclusion should mirror each other almost. Meaning what you start out with should also end the way it started.
For instance if my introduction was : Beowulf is a character of many attributes. He is strong because of his ..... Then the conclusion should go along the lines of: Beowulf is a defining character of his time because.... than summarizes your thesis Don't ask what the world needs. Ask what makes you come alive and go do it. Because what the world needs is people who have come alive. ![]() |
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