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my song Lyrics - June 1st 2011, 01:33 AM

The first lyrics/ start to the song I'm currently writting:
Hidden in my smile, covering up the pain. Each day is worse the fear, the shame, all like a curse. Then I ome apart, falling like my tears, crawling from my past, pushing for my fake smile to last.
Chorus: Hurt like a burn, scared with a thrill, dreams of change, wishes and hope. Hurt like a cut deep in my heart. Hurt so deep why can I just sleep__ forever___
this will be accompanied with acoustic guitar
Please give me your thoughts?

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Re: my song Lyrics - June 1st 2011, 01:37 AM

this is a really good start to a song very emotionall
maybe after the last line forever add

hurt so deep why can't i just sleep forever because dreams are better than reality it could be anything i want it to be

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Re: my song Lyrics - June 1st 2011, 01:50 AM

thanks for the idea, I'll keep it in mind.


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Re: my song Lyrics - June 6th 2011, 02:01 AM

I like it.

Now get a feel for the beat you want around it. Are you part of a band? Or do you know a band who you could offer this to?


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