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Kendall Ann
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my song Lyrics -
June 1st 2011, 12:33 AM
The first lyrics/ start to the song I'm currently writting:
Hidden in my smile, covering up the pain. Each day is worse the fear, the shame, all like a curse. Then I ome apart, falling like my tears, crawling from my past, pushing for my fake smile to last. Chorus: Hurt like a burn, scared with a thrill, dreams of change, wishes and hope. Hurt like a cut deep in my heart. Hurt so deep why can I just sleep__ forever___ this will be accompanied with acoustic guitar Please give me your thoughts? |
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you dont know my story
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Re: my song Lyrics -
June 1st 2011, 12:37 AM
this is a really good start to a song very emotionall
maybe after the last line forever add hurt so deep why can't i just sleep forever because dreams are better than reality it could be anything i want it to be just an idea  dont give up just hold me now  Miwa my best firend may you rest in peace I will stay here for you and you will never leave my heart because I loved you I wish you are here but now you are a concrete angel in heaven where you are loved yes I will miss you but I know your by my side every single day holding my hand |
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Sylvie's Antonym
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Re: my song Lyrics -
June 6th 2011, 01:01 AM
I like it.
Now get a feel for the beat you want around it. Are you part of a band? Or do you know a band who you could offer this to? We will ask nothing. We will demand nothing. We will take. French Graffiti, 1968 29078006202249 |
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