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Probation Essay - July 15th 2009, 05:12 PM

i need help i have to write a 3 page essay on why it's important to respect others and keep to myself and stuff and i only got an hour and a half to do it,help please
   
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Re: Probation Essay - July 15th 2009, 05:19 PM

Well, why not try and answer that yourself first? Why do you think it is important to respect others? Any thoughts? I think self reflection will be the most effective in this case.


   
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Re: Probation Essay - July 15th 2009, 05:22 PM

i already have 1 page but i cant stretch it out to 3 pages =/
   
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Re: Probation Essay - July 15th 2009, 05:23 PM

Well what sort of things have you written about so far?


   
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Re: Probation Essay - July 15th 2009, 05:24 PM

its important and dangerous and that its wrong and can get you in trouble and stuff
   
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Re: Probation Essay - July 15th 2009, 05:28 PM

Why not include something about how you would want to be treated? Something like, "I think it is very important to respect others because I want that same respect from them, too." Include why you wouldn't want to be hurt and now understand that hurting others is not okay. Don't just say it's bad because it's against the law/you get in trouble. It should be bad because it hurts others. Does that make sense?

Include how you've changed and why.


   
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Re: Probation Essay - July 15th 2009, 05:30 PM

Have you used the PEE rule? (Yes I know it sounds weird. ) PEE means point, evidence and explanation.
If you do use those rules then you should be able to 'bulk out' your essay. However, you should remember that it is quality not quantity. Did you do a plan for your essay? Even if you didn't, creating a mind-map of ideas would be a good starting point for gaining some more new ideas about respect.
   
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