my blog

[ScarletRose]

hey guys i have a blog just thought id get it out. im newer by idkaybe ud be inyerested? its called in the eyes of scarlet - blogspot soo should be intheeyesofcarlet.blogspot.com

[Gymnophoria]

Your blog is really awesome, I love the background for it!
It took me a while to find though because you missed out the s in scarlet in your link. It's on here though http://intheeyesofscarlet.blogspot.com/

[Digilodger]

We allow self-advertising on here?


Anyway, your blog is unreadable.

That font (Calligraffitti font, if I am right) is okay if you use it for the title ONLY! However, using it for your posts renders them unreadable. You're probably better off using fonts in Sans-Serif font family (like Arial), or web-safe types of fonts.

Also, we can't tell where each sentence ends. Nobody is asking for perfect grammars (none of us is English professor here), but it's really hard to tell where you end and begin your sentences. Just the basics: comma, period, capitalization; that's not hard.


Honest opinion: You cannot expect readers if no one is able to read it.

[Fairy Poppins]

It shows up as a readable font to me - Times New Roman I think.

Just to warn you, I think this thread will be moved to Chit-Chat, since you can quite easily advertise your blog in your signature or profile like everyone else.

[Digilodger]

Originally Posted by JazzyJazz

It shows up as a readable font to me - Times New Roman I think.

If your computer doesn't have the font (Calligraffitti font), your web browser would try to choose something similar or revert to the set default font.

[OMFG!You'reActuallySmart!]

While I can make out the font style, although I'm not a fan of it, I'd prefer something more readable, I agree with VoidZN in that your writing abilities make reading your blog difficult and sometimes cryptic. Your spelling is more or less fine, very few errors but your grammar is virtually non-existent, it's hard to tell where one sentence starts and ends, as well as a somewhat confusing mass of ideas. Work on grammar, punctuation and making each post a bit more coherent. The font is odd, such as lower-case "v" and "w" being the size of "t" and "b". I'd say using a more readable font is a secondary change to improving grammar, punctuation and coherence.

As VoidZN said, don't expect readers because your posts are a bit cryptic and hard to understand.

[ScarletRose]

sorry guys didnt realise the font was hard to read ill get on that. sorry i didnt know where to post it i just kinda wanted to get it out there and get some feedback.

[ScarletRose]

should be all fixed now thanks for the help guys i really appreciate it. sorry about grammer and what not. sorry if it bothers you but im just trying to get my thoughts out there..

[It's Killing Me]

Hey,

I love your blog. Its great. And I can read. And you are using all punctuations and all so it's great. And I'll be reading it. Good luck and congrats for your boyfriend. Happy for you

[Peppermint Tea.♥]

I really like the background of your blog, it's really pretty.

The content is interesting, although I found some issues with punctuation. It wasn't unreadable, though.