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Just another poem by me! - April 22nd 2012, 09:18 PM

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You could fit the entire world
In the emptiness inside this girl
When you tell her life gets better
It makes her thoughts of suicide last forever

You know she is lost
But lines were crossed
She’s in a place where pain never fades
It only turns into different layers and shades

Darkness wraps around her in chains
Life gets worse whenever she strains
A simple friend is all she asked for
So why is life shoving her out the door?

The only thoughts that come in clear
Are the ones that put her in fear
I know she says she wishes to die
Because all she does is cry

Her head is down all the time
Just thinking of how she will commit the crime
You see her all alone
But you’re scared of talking to her on your own

She just wants to be saved
Before she literally takes her life away
Can you travel that far of a distance?
Before she is gone from your existence

I thought her situation was preventable
I guess her action isn’t unstoppable
She would do anything to save herself
But no one wants to give her some help

I know how this girl feels
People act like it isn’t a big deal
But that girl is me
And sometimes life wasn’t meant to be



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Re: Just another poem by me! - April 22nd 2012, 09:32 PM

I adore this
   
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Re: Just another poem by me! - April 23rd 2012, 12:57 AM

I really love this. These are my favourite lines:

Quote:
You know she is lost
But lines were crossed
She’s in a place where pain never fades
It only turns into different layers and shades


Only a sad man can be a good artist.

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Re: Just another poem by me! - April 23rd 2012, 01:30 AM

Aw thank you guys that really means a lot.



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