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A little twist - May 5th 2012, 06:45 PM

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What do these tears really mean?
You said you care, but it didnít mean a thing
Iíve screwed up along this road
But you promised life would get better at home

I helped you out when you were in this place
So why are you forcing an upside down smile on my face?
Someone who cares is not only a want
You know darn well itís a need

Why would you let me go?
You know Iíll just take you with me down below
Iím the only one who takes in blame
Is that the reason why you came?

You told me you would be a friend
Yet nothing I did made me lose you in the end
You were never one to judge someone by what you heard
So what do you want me to learn?

Iím sick and tired of you saying you care and then not giving a damn
Now I have to walk on my hands
You knew I was thinking of taking my own life
Are you going to be another telling me Iím not worth the fight?

You took the pledge to become a better man
Why would you do this to me? I donít understand
I donít care if are in love
You promised I wouldnít be something youíd get rid of

At times like this I donít care
I have so many reasons why I would go there
Donít be surprised to find me gone
Iíve tried to fix the wrong

All you ever did was lie
And when I found out, I cried
So donít come around saying youíre sorry
Youíve helped me with the end of my story

-So I decided to take a different route with my poems. Most of them are emitional in a sad kind of way, like this one. But in this piece it has more anger it. I wrote this because I needed to express my feelings on how I felt when I heard the news when one of my best friends told my cousin that she doesn't care about me. It hurt and I'm sad with a bit of anger. So I hope you guys like it.


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Re: A little twist - May 5th 2012, 08:44 PM

I really like it. I'm sorry that happened, though.


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Re: A little twist - May 5th 2012, 09:14 PM

Thanks. I just want to avoid this person.


"There wouldn't be a song called 'You Found Me' had God known'How to Save a Life.'"

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Re: A little twist - May 6th 2012, 03:40 AM

This is a very beautiful piece of work.


My dad said girl's love guy's with scars...wheres the girl thats loving me?
Fighting is useless because they said I am just doomed to fail
"I ripped the wings off of an angel
and sowed them on my back
I watched them turn a darkening
bleeding the colour black
I soar above the clouds on these dark angel wings
keeping an eye on tortured souls
that live this life of pain"
   
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Re: A little twist - May 6th 2012, 04:31 PM

Thank you so much!


"There wouldn't be a song called 'You Found Me' had God known'How to Save a Life.'"

"Concern yourself with only your matters." -E.A.W.


R.I.P. Tatyana Sawka June 20, 1998- April 9, 2012
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