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Poem: my dear friend tina - June 7th 2012, 05:54 AM

My dear friend Tina, what have I done?
I've made another mistake, while you've made none
Without your guidance I am lost
Deserting our friendship comes with a great cost
I left you for doom
When you were in your darkest gloom
I won't forgive for what I've done
I've made another mistake, while you've made none

I thought of you today
When I looked down from my window, where the ground lay
Thought of all the times you wanted to fall
All those times I answered your call
But now here I sit alone
And glance at my non-ringing phone
I've thought about what you and me had done
I've made another mistake, while you've made none

I float in this world, stuck in the inbetween
I ponder over the memories of what I've seen
I remember you at your prime
If only I could re-live that one time
But now all i remember is our last fight
Sitting here in the dark lonely night
Thinking about what I could have done
I've made another mistake, while you've made none

You won't listen to my apology
I do not blame you for not listening to me
You wouldn't care if I died right now
And today I make one last vow
I wont turn my back on a friend
And if I shall then hell I will descend
I won't forget the evil I have done
I've made my final mistake, while you've made none

Tell me what you think, also read my other poem called: Tina's letter. Tina these poems go out to you, I miss you my old friend, and I am sorry.



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Re: Poem: my dear friend tina - June 7th 2012, 03:11 PM

This is a really good poem, I like the emotion in it. I can really feel words that you wrote like you meant every one of them. I'm sorry for whatever happened. If you need anyone feel free to message me.


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Re: Poem: my dear friend tina - June 8th 2012, 02:15 AM

Thank you, I really did mean it...it's been a tough time dealing with the mistakes I have made



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Re: Poem: my dear friend tina - June 9th 2012, 07:17 AM

wow, you are a very good writer! I love the emotion! I can feel exactly (or close) to what you mean just by your words. I very much admire your style of writing. If you would ever like to talk feel free to PM me. I am new here but Ive posted 4 or so of my own poems. hope to talk to ou soon!
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Re: Poem: my dear friend tina - June 9th 2012, 10:56 PM

Thanks, I do my best.



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Re: Poem: my dear friend tina - June 10th 2012, 11:06 PM

i love the emotion in this, and the repitition really helps that along. very well written. feel free to PM me if you need anything


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