brokenLULLABY9697's poem that I made

[Agony]

I sit here and look around
Even though I am in pain, I make no sound
I hurt myself more everyday
Ever since you guys went away
Matthew why did you break my heart?
I thought it was true love at the start
Mimi you were my best friend
But you went with Matthew in the end
I kissed you both to show my love
But y'all flew away like a dove
I thought you both would feel my pain
But you both left me in the saddest rain
My tears fall for you Matthew
If only our love was true
My cuts bleed for Mimi
And in the end you always flee me
My depression grows sadder and sadder
I am as mad as the mad hatter
My arms aren't the only thing scarred
My heart is now teared
You moved on and left me behind
Aren't y'all both so kind?
Now I sit her and look around
But still, I make no sound.

[mindflower]

Every time I read this I'm blown away...because its like...my life, dead on, in such a beautiful poem. Thank you so much, really, its great.

[Agony]

Thanks, I do my best...although I'm only 14 I've had a lot of shit happen to me that nobody knows about...not my family or my friends...so I have a lot of hidden pain and I like to release it by poetry so it was easy to use your description and add my own thoughts to match your own, but I'm really glad you like it

[mindflower]

Im only 14 as well, so yeah, having so much shit is just overwhelming. it took over my life, my grades, my emotions, my friends and trust. I know how it is when no one knows, though man know about my past problems, not very many know about my present. Stay strong <3