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Self Expression Poems, stories, artwork and similar creations are great ways to let out your thoughts or feelings. Please share your work with us here!

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Red face (Poem) A Big Mistake - July 4th 2012, 06:02 AM

Hey guys,

So I have been keeping an eye out on the Self Expression section of the forums for awhile now. Well... I have a little secret to share. I LOVE poetry and love expressing myself through my writing. I've been a nervous wreck about sharing my writing because I don't want it stolen, but here is a poem I just wrote. If you guys like it, let me know and I'll share some more with you all.

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A Big Mistake

You know that feeling,
When you have so much to say,

I sit here and struggle,
Knowing I won't get my way,

There is no way to make you get it,
No way to make you understand,

That though all of this feels bad now,
It is all part of His grand plan,

Though I'm still really confused,
I think we need to take a break,

The constant fighting, arguing,
Did we realize what was at stake?,

You know I love you,
Or so you say,

But do you get it?,
Love came your way,

For now this is only small,
After all, this is just a break,

But bear with me as I work through it all,
As I hope I didn't make some big mistake.

(To anyone who knows- My poetry can't get stolen when I post it here, correct? Thanks for any info!)


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Re: (Poem) A Big Mistake - July 4th 2012, 09:53 PM

This is awesome, Keep writing <3
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Re: (Poem) A Big Mistake - July 4th 2012, 10:10 PM

This is really good! I love this good job
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Re: (Poem) A Big Mistake - July 6th 2012, 08:19 PM

Good job, this is very well written. Keep writing!


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Re: (Poem) A Big Mistake - July 7th 2012, 01:36 AM

I really like this! Keep writing!





From day one I talked about getting out
But not forgetting about
How all my worst fears are letting out
He said, "Why put a new address on the same old loneliness?"
When breathing just passes the time
Until we all just get old and die
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Re: (Poem) A Big Mistake - July 7th 2012, 05:19 AM

I found it beautiful.i cant even explain what i want to say


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