Will it ever be enough.... a poem about acceptence

[Lelo]

My grades can show you I don't understand
And all these test can prove I dont learn right
But it would only take you to talk to me to know that I have good ideas

My cuts can show you I am in pain
And my blood can prove what I am willing to do for you
But it would only take you to help me to know that there is hope for me

My lack of smile shows you I am unhappy
And my tears can prove that I am unable to cope
But it would only take you to hold me to know that I can be strong

My body limp can show you I have give in
And the empty bottle on the floor can prove that I had no regrets
But it would only take you to love me to know that I can live

[CanadaCraig]

Hi Marie!!

Good for you!

I think it's a good poem.

Keep in mind that the one person you CAN count on to talk to, to help, to hold and to love you... IS you!!!

GBH - Craig!

[EmNZ]

(=I agree with Craig too. I really like this, it’s sad but genuine and true.
Stay strong beautiful, you’re worth looking after,
xxx

[better-than-ecstasy]

Aw I love this! Great job! Keep up the good work!

[mindflower]

this is truly an amazing inspiring poem. Really, it moved me and it already shows how strong of a person you are <3 keep up the good work, and stay strong <3 you arent alone

[Lelo]

Thank you so much for the support and encouragement. This is the first poem I have ever written, I am normally a song and story person but apperently my fist try wasnt too bad. THANKS

[Evanescent]

I agree, the poem is very moving.