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Will it ever be enough.... a poem about acceptence
My grades can show you I don't understand
And all these test can prove I dont learn right But it would only take you to talk to me to know that I have good ideas My cuts can show you I am in pain And my blood can prove what I am willing to do for you But it would only take you to help me to know that there is hope for me My lack of smile shows you I am unhappy And my tears can prove that I am unable to cope But it would only take you to hold me to know that I can be strong My body limp can show you I have give in And the empty bottle on the floor can prove that I had no regrets But it would only take you to love me to know that I can live |
Re: Will it ever be enough.... a poem about acceptence
Hi Marie!! :)
Good for you! I think it's a good poem. Keep in mind that the one person you CAN count on to talk to, to help, to hold and to love you... IS you!!! GBH - Craig! :) |
Re: Will it ever be enough.... a poem about acceptence
(=I agree with Craig too. I really like this, it’s sad but genuine and true.
Stay strong beautiful, you’re worth looking after, xxx |
Re: Will it ever be enough.... a poem about acceptence
Aw I love this! Great job! Keep up the good work!
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Re: Will it ever be enough.... a poem about acceptence
this is truly an amazing inspiring poem. Really, it moved me and it already shows how strong of a person you are <3 keep up the good work, and stay strong <3 you arent alone
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It means alot
Thank you so much for the support and encouragement. This is the first poem I have ever written, I am normally a song and story person but apperently my fist try wasnt too bad. THANKS
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Re: Will it ever be enough.... a poem about acceptence
I agree, the poem is very moving.
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